Amory (not my character. I moved the post)

[Avernus]

Um I was wondering if I could join
NAme: amory
Gender: Male
Age 3 springs
Pelt:Snow white
Orbs silver
prsonality: He may be mean at first but can turn into a real sweat heart. HE is always prepared for battles
Powers:Communicating with the dead
He is super speedy
Control of fire
Shadow majic
And if you dont mind:wings tipped in black(let me know if I can keep them or not)

[Abena]

Um sorry but you'll have to be more literate that. And no wings please. Also add more to your personality, and tell his history. If you do that and I approve then you're accepted.

[amory]

Personality: Amory is a very odd wolf. He will just sit upon a rock and howl to the sky. He will also do the same to the water. He has a need to comune with the earth and sky. He will fight for his life and is very foolish sometimes. He alsways treats fights like games, and games like a contest. He doesnt like others much at first but when he gets to know you be prepared for total mayhem. If you get on his good side be prepared to meet an amasing wolf.

History:Amory was abandoned as a pup when his pack was attacked. He lived on his own ever
since. He grew up fending for himself. Catching his own food, fighting other wolves, and just learning how to hunt and live. He also did not live in the safest place for their were mountain lion dens all over the place and he grew up fighting them.
One was worst though. It was a huge males den he stumbled into after getting injured from falling off a tall rock. He tried to run but he was too slow. The cat grabbed him and left a large scar running down his back. He took the injury well though and it healed quickly. He started traveling to somewere he did not know of. He just knew he needed to get there.
He passed by every pack he met not caring what they did or said. He did stop somewere to rest but was attacked at night by an angry fae. The next morning he had sprinted off not stopping for anything this time. His journy would soon come to an end but not now. Not util he found the pack.

[Ghost]

Also,you may ONLY have ONE of the approved powers on the list.You have 4-5.Plus,please no wing/magic unless you consult Abena first.And yes,you need to be much more literate in order to be accepted.So far,not accepted.

[Ghost]

Also,you did not use the correct joining form.
Current state: NOT accepted.